mihi

Nō Havelock North ahau

Kei Heretaunga tōku kainga ināianei

Ko Frimley toku kura

Ko Simon matua

Ko Gayleen whāea

Ko Jaqob tōku ingoa

Nō reira tēnā koutou tēnā koutou

Tēnā tātou katoa

THE FRIENDLY Village

• Amazing things pic story - choose a picture from the file sent to you in your writing folder.Make a new writing document and title it.
• Your story should have a hook in sentence, a beginning middle and end, descriptive words, long and short sentences and capital letters and full stops.
• Your story could have paragraphs, speech and speech marks, alliteration, onomatopoeia and similes.
• Edit and check your story on your own , with a buddy and have it checked by a  
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Once upon a time I walked down a lane then there were rocks dug into the ground. I  followed the rocks then it lead to a fancy  place where  the dug rocks ended. I looked up.  I looked at myself . I couldn't believe my eyes I saw people building  homes  for people.   I had a walk around the village, heaps of people said, “hi.”  I  was thinking it was a friendly place.  As soon as I had a quick walk around the village  it started to get  dark. I ran as quick as a cheetah to get back home.

Swing Bridge

Once upon a time there was a troll under the bridge and when I walked to  the bridge a gigantic troll came up and roared at me . I got terrified as I sprinted over the terrified bridge as I got to the other side. As I got to the other side I was sweating.